Finalising the script

In week seven, every group present their story line according to the script. We have achieved some feedbacks from classmates and Toula after we presented, for example, Toula suggests us to improve the story expression by illustrating the character in more specific ways in term of their occupation and situation. According to this recommendation, the group have discussed and we came up with some idea to boost the character’s action such as using more supporting actors in the scene of teacher (Miji) walking into classroom. In fact, we have considered improving all characters in order to make the film more attractive as Toula and classmates suggested.


After the presentation and feedback section, the group started to draw the storyboard by the contribution of all members, mainly Angela and Yan. We hope to finish the storyboard and present to Toula for the feedback as soon as possible, according to the lack of time we have left for filming and editing sections.